Question

To earn the appreciation of honest critics
and endure the betrayal of false friends;

To follow the way your honest critics want you to trail and change their outlook about you. To suffer the pain your false friends give you from within, but don’t let it show up on the outside.

to leave the world a bit better,
whether by a healthy child,
a garden patch
or a redeemed social condition;
to know even one life has breathed easier
because you have lived.


To help out, support and give hope to individuals around. To make the atmosphere around you clean. To lead others to the direction of success. To give in your time and importance to every little and big things around. To teach children manners and restrict them from doing something wrong so they can grow up to be wise and free from illnesses.

How does this sound?

Answer 1

Fine. Go with it!!

Answer 2

Thanks Writeacher for all your help with this. Because of you I was able to go beyond the lines and add in this information. Thank you very much.

Answer 3

You're very welcome!

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