Question

" Today I will be informing you abot the Civil War. The war the tore friends and families apart and slavery. "
-Erin

Is that a good intro for a 4-H project intro??

Answer 1

No. You have an incomplete sentence.
You also haven't told the audience what you're going to tell them about the Civil War.

There are whole libraries of books about this war.

Answer 2

Without reading at least a rough draft of the entire speech, there's no way to tell if this is good or not.

See Ms. Sue's post below.

Answer 3

But they did say to introduce it or else i wouldn't have done that. Because I hate doing that!!

Answer 4

Too bad, Erin. Obviously you can't benefit from our help.

Answer 5

thanks anyway