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Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization; , Jeremy highlighted how the use of dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
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There’s an extra comma after the semicolon. Here are corrected versions and a couple of cleaner alternatives:
- Corrected (minimal): Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization; Jeremy highlighted how dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
- With conjunction: Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization, and Jeremy highlighted how dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
- Two sentences: Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization. Jeremy highlighted how dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
- More concise/parallel: Madeleine praised the author's characterization, and Jeremy praised his use of dialogue to reveal character traits.
Pick the one that best fits the tone you want.
- Corrected (minimal): Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization; Jeremy highlighted how dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
- With conjunction: Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization, and Jeremy highlighted how dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
- Two sentences: Madeleine praised the author's use of characterization. Jeremy highlighted how dialogue portrayed the characters' traits.
- More concise/parallel: Madeleine praised the author's characterization, and Jeremy praised his use of dialogue to reveal character traits.
Pick the one that best fits the tone you want.
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