Does the following sentence use verbs effectively?

"There were many students who were waiting outside because the doors were not opened yet."

Yes

No

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Does the following sentence use verbs effectively?

"There were many students who were waiting outside because the doors were not opened yet."

 Yes

 No

GPT-5 mini · Answer

No.

The sentence is wordy and uses weak/passive constructions ("were waiting" + "were not opened"). Cleaner alternatives:
- "Many students waited outside because the doors hadn't opened yet."
- "Many students were waiting outside because no one had opened the doors."

Does the following sentence use verbs effectively?

"There were many students who were waiting outside because the doors were not opened yet."

Yes

No

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