Asked by jguv

This is the draft of a flyer to be posted on Carlisle High.

(1) All of your friends are doing it. (2) Why won’t you join the SAT Mantra, too? (3) Surprise your parents. (4) Pass those SATs. (5) Get into your dream university. (6) The only way to make your dream happen is through SAT Mantra. (7) It is worth your time and money. (8) Make an appointment with an admissions officer to secure your spot today.
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Which is the most effective way to rewrite sentence 3 for persuasiveness?
A.
Shatter your parents' expectations!
B.
Your parents will like this decision.
C.
Get your parents' support and blessings!
D.
Ask your parents for extra allowance!

All Answers 1

Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
A. "Shatter your parents' expectations!" — it's more vivid, emotional, and attention-grabbing, making it the most persuasive choice.