Asked by jguv

This is the draft of a flyer to be posted on Carlisle High.

(1) All of your friends are doing it. (2) Why won’t you join the SAT Mantra, too? (3) Surprise your parents. (4) Pass those SATs. (5) Get into your dream university. (6) The only way to make your dream happen is through SAT Mantra. (7) It is worth your time and money. (8) Make an appointment with an admissions officer to secure your spot today.
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The author decides to replace sentence 4 with the following statement.

Ace your exams with flying colors!

The author has revised this statement for persuasiveness by
A.
adding descriptiveness and enthusiasm.
B.
replacing "SATs" with the word "exams."
C.
making the sentence longer to convince.
D.
appealing to the reader's sense of duty.

All Answers 1

Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
A. The revised line uses more descriptive, enthusiastic language ("Ace" and "with flying colors"), which heightens its persuasive appeal.