Asked by jguv

My doubts were validated when my mother had to spend a fortune for a dress my sister was only going to wear for one night. (2) After watching my older sister spend more time contemplating her prom night than preparing for her finals, I suspected something about the prom was not right. (3) Not to mention, the stress of not being asked on a date until a few days before prom gave my sister uncontrollable breakouts. (4) One of her friends couldn't go to the prom because of she was running a high fever. (5) Watching my senior friends get caught up in trivialities and material things deeply saddened me. (6) I realized that soon it would be my turn to face the trauma of the prom night. (7) I realized that I did not want to go through with it. (8) Isn't it about time we started rethinking prom?
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Which sentence in this paragraph could best be removed to improve the flow of the paragraph?
A.
sentence 6
B.
sentence 3
C.
sentence 4
D.
sentence 5

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
C. Sentence 4 — it’s an irrelevant, awkwardly phrased detail that doesn't support the paragraph’s main point and interrupts the flow.