Question

A nurse writes a patient handout about using sunscreen. The handout is five pages long and single-spaced. What could the nurse do to improve the handout and make it more accessible to the audience?

use more technical language

include headers and bullet points

make the handout more concise

publish the handout in a professional medical journal

Answer 1

Best choices: include headers and bullet points, and make the handout more concise.

Why:
- Headers and bullet points make material easier to scan and find key actions (who, what, when, how).
- Shortening the handout and using plain, simple language improves comprehension and retention—aim for short paragraphs, 6th–8th grade reading level, and one main idea per section.

What not to do:
- Do not use more technical language—medical jargon reduces accessibility.
- Publishing in a professional medical journal isn’t appropriate for a patient education handout; journals target clinicians, not patients.

Extra tips to improve accessibility:
- Use larger font, ample white space, and subheadings.
- Include simple visuals or icons demonstrating application and timing.
- Highlight key action steps (e.g., “Apply 1 ounce 15 minutes before sun; reapply every 2 hours”).
- Test the handout with a few patients for clarity and revise based on feedback.