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Read this sentence.
The rude behavior of the customer service representative was the cause of my decision to quit doing business with the company.
What is the best way to edit this sentence to make it more concise and effective?
a. The rude behavior of the customer service representative was the cause of my decision to take my business elsewhere and quit doing business with the company.
b. The customer service representative’s rude behavior caused me to quit doing business with the company.
c. Her rude behavior was the cause of my decision to quit doing business with them.
d. The extremely rude behavior of the customer service representative was the cause of my decision to quit doing business with the company.
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It uses active voice, removes wordy phrasing ("was the cause of"), and is clear and concise.
It uses active voice, removes wordy phrasing ("was the cause of"), and is clear and concise.
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