Asked by kkj

Read the excerpt from an argumentative essay about voting.

It does not seem like one vote can make a difference. Every eligible person should vote.

Which revision offers the most improvement in sentence fluency?
Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.
It does not seem like one vote can make a difference, although every eligible person should vote.
It does not seem like one vote can make a difference because every eligible person should vote.
Since it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
"Although it does not seem like one vote can make a difference, every eligible person should vote."

This revision combines the two short sentences into one smooth sentence and correctly uses "although" to show the contrast between the perception and the recommendation. The other options create illogical or awkward relationships between the clauses.