Question

Simon could stand outside a store that
does
sell frozen fruit drinks and survey
customer(s) about their favorite local frozen fruit drink shop.

Answer 1

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Corrected sentence (simple):
- Simon could stand outside a store that sells frozen fruit drinks and survey customers about their favorite local frozen-fruit drink shop.

Alternative phrasings:
- Simon could stand outside a frozen-fruit drink shop and ask customers which local shop they prefer.
- Simon could survey people leaving a store that sells frozen fruit drinks to learn their favorite local places for frozen fruit drinks.
- Simon could collect quick customer feedback outside a frozen-fruit drink retailer about where people usually buy frozen fruit drinks.

Short in-person script (10–20 seconds):
- “Hi — I’m doing a one-question quick survey. What’s your favorite local place for frozen fruit drinks? It’ll only take a few seconds.”

Suggested quick survey questions (keep it short to maximize participation):
1. What’s your favorite local frozen fruit drink shop? (open)
2. How often do you buy frozen fruit drinks? (daily / weekly / monthly / rarely)
3. Why do you choose that shop? (taste / price / location / variety / other)
4. How satisfied are you with that shop? (very satisfied / satisfied / neutral / dissatisfied)
5. Would you recommend it to others? (yes / no)

Logistics and ethics (brief):
- Ask the store manager for permission to survey on their premises.
- Keep interactions brief and polite; offer a small incentive (coupon or entry in a raffle) if needed.
- Get verbal consent before recording responses; don’t collect sensitive personal data.
- Note sampling bias: surveying outside one store captures customers of that type/location and may not represent the whole area.

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