Question

Use the claim to answer the question.
Claim: During summer vacation, I take a walk every day after lunch. The air is refreshing and helps me prepare for the rest of the day. I also love taking a few minutes to break up the day. I can't imagine going without my lunchtime walk!
During the school year, students should be able to take a walk outside every day after lunch.
What change should the writer make if they want the text to have a more formal style?
(1 point)
• Add a sentence with statistics about walks.
O Replace the word walk with the phrase daily jaunt.
Revise to avoid first person pronouns.
Remove the unsupported claim about fresh air being refreshing.

Answer 1

Revise to avoid first person pronouns.