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[1] It amazes me that a week ago, only seven days prior to the big event, I was so worried that my camp presentation on conservation would be a big flop. [2] A teacher once told me that if you grab the audience’s attention at the very beginning, they’ll be hooked. [3] She was right. [4] I began my presentation by showing how a solar cell and a simple wire powered by the sun could use the sun’s powerful rays to make a fan spin.
Which is the best revision of sentence 1?
It amazes me that a week ago – seven days prior – I was so worried.
It amazes me that a week ago I was worried that my camp presentation would be a flop.
It amazes me that I was worried that my conservation would be a flop.
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"It amazes me that a week ago I was worried that my camp presentation would be a flop."
This version is concise, grammatically correct, and preserves the original meaning without unnecessary or awkward phrasing.
This version is concise, grammatically correct, and preserves the original meaning without unnecessary or awkward phrasing.
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