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“Lady,” he said in a firm nasal voice, “I’d give a fortune to live where I could see me a sun do that every evening.”
“Does it every evening,” the old woman said and sat back down.
The daughter sat down too and watched him with a cautious sly look as if he were a bird that had come up very close. He leaned to one side, rooting in his pants pocket, and in a second he brought out a package of chewing gum and offered her a piece. She took it and unpeeled it and began to chew without taking her eyes off him. He offered the old woman a piece but she only raised her upper lip to indicate she had no teeth.
—“The Life You Save May Be Your Own,”
Flannery O’Connor
How does this passage help reveal Mr. Shiftlet’s secret motivation?
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The passage exposes Shiftlet’s motives by showing how he uses sentimental talk and small, transactional gestures to buy affection and establish control rather than out of genuine feeling.
- His line “I’d give a fortune to live where I could see me a sun do that every evening” is theatrical hyperbole—spoken in a “firm nasal voice”—that reads as performance. He is selling an image of domestic beauty and stability, not expressing a real emotional desire.
- The physical gesture of “rooting in his pants pocket” and producing chewing gum makes the scene overtly transactional: he offers a petty gift to win favor. The gum is bait, not intimacy.
- The old woman’s toothless gesture and the daughter’s “cautious sly look as if he were a bird that had come up very close” show that the family perceives his approach as calculated. The daughter’s vigilance indicates she recognizes he is a potential taker being tested.
- Taken together, these details reveal that Shiftlet’s real motive is self-interest—to secure a place (and, in the larger story, the car and material security)—by manipulating appearances of kindness and romantic talk, rather than any genuine commitment to the women.
In short, O’Connor uses voice, gesture, and the reactions of the Craters to show Shiftlet as a performative, acquisitive figure whose apparent sentimentalism masks a calculating, material motivation.
- His line “I’d give a fortune to live where I could see me a sun do that every evening” is theatrical hyperbole—spoken in a “firm nasal voice”—that reads as performance. He is selling an image of domestic beauty and stability, not expressing a real emotional desire.
- The physical gesture of “rooting in his pants pocket” and producing chewing gum makes the scene overtly transactional: he offers a petty gift to win favor. The gum is bait, not intimacy.
- The old woman’s toothless gesture and the daughter’s “cautious sly look as if he were a bird that had come up very close” show that the family perceives his approach as calculated. The daughter’s vigilance indicates she recognizes he is a potential taker being tested.
- Taken together, these details reveal that Shiftlet’s real motive is self-interest—to secure a place (and, in the larger story, the car and material security)—by manipulating appearances of kindness and romantic talk, rather than any genuine commitment to the women.
In short, O’Connor uses voice, gesture, and the reactions of the Craters to show Shiftlet as a performative, acquisitive figure whose apparent sentimentalism masks a calculating, material motivation.
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