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Read the excerpt from an argumentative essay on space exploration.

We probably couldn’t go to all the stars because they’re too far away. It would take a long time to get there.

The sentences need to be revised for this type of essay because they
contain spelling and punctuation errors.
contain generalizations and contractions.
show a connection between ideas.
show the author’s attitude toward the topic.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
contain generalizations and contractions.

Explanation: argumentative essays require a formal, precise tone. The original uses contractions ("couldn’t," "they’re") and vague language ("probably," "a long time"). Revise to remove contractions and make the claim more specific or supported.

Possible revision:
"We cannot travel to all the stars because they are extremely distant. With current technology, reaching even the nearest star, Proxima Centauri, would take tens of thousands of years."