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Read a draft sentence from an argumentative essay.

When Japanese Americans were relocated to internment camps, they lost many things.

Which is the best revision of this sentence to make it more specific?
When Japanese Americans were relocated to internment camps, they suffered many devastating losses.
When Japanese Americans were relocated to internment camps, they lost homes, farms, and belongings.
Relocating Japanese Americans to internment camps caused them to suffer many devastating losses.
Relocating Japanese Americans to internment camps caused them to lose many things.

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"When Japanese Americans were relocated to internment camps, they lost homes, farms, and belongings."

This is best because it replaces vague wording ("many things") with concrete examples of what was lost. The other choices remain general or just rephrase the vagueness.