Question

Which revision BEST adds adjectives to make the sentence more detailed and engaging?

Original sentence:

The dog ran across the yard.


The dog ran fast across the yard.

The small, energetic dog ran across the grassy yard.

The dog ran across the yard quickly.

The dog ran across the yard and barked.

Answer 1

"The small, energetic dog ran across the grassy yard."

This revision adds multiple descriptive adjectives (small, energetic, grassy) that make the scene more detailed and vivid.