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Read the paragraph.

Salvador Dalí, born Salvador Felipe Jacinto Dalí y Domenech. In Figueras, Spain in 1904. He was a Surrealist painter and printmaker; some of his most notable works explore subconscious imagery. In fact, he was profoundly influenced by the writings of Sigmund Freud. An Austrian neurologist who created psychoanalysis.

Which is the best way to improve this paragraph’s sentence fluency?
Correct the run-on sentences.
Correct the fused sentences.
Correct the comma splices.
Correct the sentence fragments.

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Correct the sentence fragments.

Several lines are incomplete: "Salvador Dalí, born Salvador Felipe Jacinto Dalí y Domenech." and "In Figueras, Spain in 1904." and "An Austrian neurologist who created psychoanalysis." Fixing those fragments improves fluency. For example:

Salvador Dalí was born Salvador Felipe Jacinto Dalí y Domenech in Figueras, Spain, in 1904. He was a Surrealist painter and printmaker; some of his most notable works explore subconscious imagery. In fact, he was profoundly influenced by the writings of Sigmund Freud, an Austrian neurologist who created psychoanalysis.