Question

Subject: Pretty Paws Team Meeting Change

Dear

Pretty Paws Team,

Thank you for your hard work during the holiday season. The purpose of this email is to let you know that our January meeting has been moved to Wednesday the 21st at 7 a.m. in the main office. Please bring your team handbooks. Please reply if you have any questions or concerns. Sincerely,

Nina Keiffer
Owner, Pretty Paws Doggie Day Spa

What error has been made in the email?

The purpose of the email is unclear.
Formal language is not used consistently.
The subject line should not be capitalized.
There are formatting issues in the greeting and closing.

Answer 1

There are formatting issues in the greeting and closing.

("Dear" is on its own line instead of "Dear Pretty Paws Team," and "Sincerely," should be on its own line before the signature.)