Question

Just over a decade ago, the thought of making money from social media was absurd: Instagram hadn’t been conceived yet, and YouTube only had 160 million users. Nowadays, social media influencers are able to reach a wider audience than prior to 2008 and make more money. According to CNBC, with enough followers and views, a popular social media influencer can make $100,000 in just one year and reach millions of people with just one post.

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33 percent of teenagers spend between 4–8 hours a day on social media and 29 percent of teenagers spend over 8 hours a day on social media, according to Common Sense Media. Due to this large amount of time on social media platforms, influencers can have a significant impact on teenagers.

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The idea that social media influences teenagers the most out of all other age groups rings true for sophomore Kaavya Baliga. “In general, I feel like social media affects teens or children more because they are still in a place of a lot of growth, as opposed to older folks […] If you are brought up [thinking that] you don’t look like the people you look up to, it’s hard to have confidence or feel a sense of belonging,” Baliga said.

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Sophomore Amory Healy also agrees that social media influencers have the most reach over teenagers. “Teens with moldable brains are really the highest impact group for social media […] Especially since most teens don’t have good enough support systems set up to protect them from negative influence, the social media influencer impact is usually detrimental,” Healy said.

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Healy also believes that many things that social media influencers share online don’t accurately reflect their day-to-day lives. “The majority of social media contains people trying to put out the best version of themselves, so the audience doesn’t get to see the flaws and the real deal,” Healy said.

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Senior Marshall Seligson believes that influencers can impact teenagers in more casual ways. “Beyond products they endorse, social media influencers often affect topics of conversation and even the way my friends and I talk to one another,” Seligson said. Seligson states that some phrases that teenagers frequently use are taught through social media influencers.

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According to freshman Julia Capasso, social media has a mixed impact on teenagers. “I think that there are some [beneficial influencers] … [b]ut I do think that there’s the opposite side of that spectrum of people that rose to fame and tend to promote negative concepts to young audiences.”

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Like Capasso, junior Reese Weiden believes that the impact social media has on teenagers depends on several factors. “I think a lot of [social media] can get negative and that a lot of influencers will use Photoshop to alter their images, which creates unrealistic standards for teens, especially who might not generally be exposed to other stuff,” Weiden said. “But, positively, I think that it can promote healthy lifestyles […] It just really depends on what kind of influencer you’re following.”

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According to Seligson, the posts that influencers produce can be beneficial for their audience, as he believes that channels like “Yes Theory” have encouraged teenagers to become more empathetic and compassionate citizens. However, influencers’ overall impact truly depends on how each influencer chooses to handle their fame. “I think social media can be a great outlet for people to express themselves, but social media influencers with large audiences have a responsibility to promote values that they believe in,” senior Marshall Seligson said. “It’s truly up to the viewers to decide what content they interact with and what content they want to see more of. The good and the bad.” ❧

Answer 1

I’m not sure exactly what you want done with this text. I can: summarize it, edit for clarity/flow/grammar, rewrite it as a news story or an op‑ed, shorten it for social posts, check factual claims, create headlines, or give publishing suggestions. Which would you like?

Below I’ll give a short summary, a polished edited version (tightened and flow-smoothed), suggested headlines, and a brief checklist for fact‑checking and publication. Tell me if you want a different output.

Brief summary
- The piece argues that social media influencers have a growing economic power and significant effects on teenagers, who spend many hours daily on social platforms. Students quoted in the article offer mixed views: some say teens are especially vulnerable to influencers because they’re still developing, others note both harms (unrealistic standards, negative messaging) and benefits (promoting empathy, healthy lifestyles). The effect depends on the influencer and on viewers’ choices.

Polished/edited version (concise)
Just over a decade ago, the idea of making money from social media seemed unlikely: Instagram didn’t exist and YouTube had far fewer users. Now, with large audiences and high engagement, popular influencers can earn six figures in a year and reach millions with a single post.

Teenagers spend a large portion of their day on social platforms—Common Sense Media reports that 33 percent spend 4–8 hours daily and 29 percent spend over 8 hours—so influencers can have a major impact.

Sophomore Kaavya Baliga says teens are especially affected because they’re still developing. “If you’re brought up thinking you don’t look like the people you look up to, it’s hard to have confidence or feel a sense of belonging,” she said. Sophomore Amory Healy agreed: “Teens with moldable brains are the highest‑impact group for social media,” adding that many teens lack support systems to shield them from negative influence.

Healy also noted that influencers often present an idealized version of life: “The majority of social media contains people trying to put out the best version of themselves, so the audience doesn’t get to see the flaws and the real deal.” Senior Marshall Seligson pointed out more casual effects, such as how influencers shape conversation and slang among friends.

Other students were more mixed. Freshman Julia Capasso said some influencers are beneficial, but many promote harmful ideas to young audiences. Junior Reese Weiden highlighted both harms—Photoshopped images and unrealistic standards—and benefits, like promoting healthier lifestyles.

Seligson added that some channels, such as Yes Theory, can encourage empathy and compassion. Ultimately, he said, influencers’ impact depends on how they handle their fame and on viewers’ choices about which content to support. “It’s up to the viewers to decide what content they interact with,” he said.

Suggested headlines
- Teens, Time and Trust: How Influencers Shape a Generation
- Social Media’s Growing Power: Students Weigh the Influence on Teens
- From Income to Influence: Why Teenagers Are Most Affected by Social Media

Fact‑checking and editing checklist before publishing
- Verify statistics and cite sources directly: the CNBC claim about influencers earning $100,000; the YouTube user count and year; Common Sense Media numbers.
- Confirm exact quotes and the spelled names/grades of interviewees.
- Remove or explain unclear numeration in the original (paragraph numbers 2–9 seem like editorial markers).
- Consider adding data on outcomes (mental health studies, body image research) if you want a stronger evidence base.
- Balance the piece with expert commentary (psychologist, media researcher) if available.
- Tighten or shorten long quotes for readability; keep at least one or two longer verbatim quotes to preserve voice.

If you want, I can:
- Produce a shorter social‑media summary or a 30–60 second read.
- Rewrite this as a news brief or an opinion piece.
- Fact‑check the stats and add citations.
- Create pull quotes, a lead paragraph for a newspaper, or an infographic outline. Which would be most helpful?