Question

make it 2 paragraphs with 7 short sentences each When I learned to ride a bike it was really scary. My dad held the seat and said, "Look at the horizon," so I looked at the trees and not at the wheel. When he let go I felt wobbly like a jelly and then for a little bit I was flying! I fell on the gravel and my knee hurt—big owie—but I got up. I tried again and again until my legs and hands knew what to do. Now I like riding because falling made me brave.

Answer 1

Learning to ride a bike was scary. My dad held the seat. He told me to look at the horizon. I watched the trees, not the wheel. He let go and I felt wobbly. For a moment I felt like I was flying. Then I fell on the gravel.

My knee hurt a lot. It was a big owie. I stood up and tried again. I kept practicing over and over. My legs and hands learned what to do. Now I like riding my bike. Falling made me brave.