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Select the misplaced or dangling modifier.
Slowly ascending the roller coaster, the fairground below looked increasingly small, like
a miniature model of itself.
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The dangling modifier is: "Slowly ascending the roller coaster."
Why: It incorrectly attaches to "the fairground below" (which cannot ascend).
Possible corrections:
- "Slowly ascending the roller coaster, I watched the fairground below, which looked increasingly small, like a miniature model of itself."
- "As the roller coaster slowly ascended, the fairground below looked increasingly small, like a miniature model of itself."
Why: It incorrectly attaches to "the fairground below" (which cannot ascend).
Possible corrections:
- "Slowly ascending the roller coaster, I watched the fairground below, which looked increasingly small, like a miniature model of itself."
- "As the roller coaster slowly ascended, the fairground below looked increasingly small, like a miniature model of itself."
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