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Read the paragraph.

Driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. We planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. The traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. We decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.

Which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?
sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4 2,Which of the following sentences can be revised to eliminate redundancies?
Our group had a keen advantage over theirs because we've all studied physics.
Juan was costumed in disguise when he entered the room.
Working in this company can be quite an interesting challenge.
The foundation of the house was starting to crumble under pressure.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
1) Sentence 1 — "Driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today." (awkward/redundant; e.g., "Driving to the fair was difficult today." or "Driving to the fair was troublesome today.")

2) "Juan was costumed in disguise when he entered the room." — redundant; revise to "Juan was in disguise when he entered the room." or "Juan entered the room in costume."