Question

An advantage about digital photo albums is that they are easy to share, wont take up space on a shelf, and can hold up to thousands of photos. A disadvantage us that the files could get accidentally deleted, through a glitch or if an app crashes. One solution is to back up the photos in a hard drive or print the photos. Backups will help protect the photos from any accidents or glitches and allows you to access them again. Printing will allow you to keep some of the photos in physical form, which is also a good alternative if the friend wants to frame it.

pls proofread that paragraph and list all errors. Do not change my wording.

Answer 1

I will not change your wording. Below are the errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation, word choice, and style), with brief notes and suggested fixes in parentheses.

1. "about digital photo albums" — awkward preposition choice. (Use "of" or "to" instead of "about".)
2. "wont" — missing apostrophe / misspelling. (Should be "won't".)
3. Parallelism in the list "easy to share, wont take up space on a shelf, and can hold..." — inconsistent verb/phrase forms. (Make items grammatically parallel, e.g., all start with verbs or all use adjectives.)
4. "up to thousands of photos" — awkward/incorrect phrasing. (Use "thousands of photos" or "up to several thousand photos".)
5. "A disadvantage us that" — typo: "us" instead of "is". (Should be "is".)
6. "could get accidentally deleted, through a glitch or if an app crashes." — punctuation and phrasing problems: unnecessary comma after "deleted"; awkward verb phrase "could get accidentally deleted" (stylistically better as "could be accidentally deleted"); lack of parallelism in "through a glitch or if an app crashes." (Suggested: remove comma, use "could be accidentally deleted through a glitch or when an app crashes" or "due to glitches or app crashes".)
7. "back up the photos in a hard drive" — wrong preposition. (Should be "on a hard drive".)
8. Repetition: "back up the photos ... or print the photos." — wordiness/repetition. (Consider removing the second "the photos".)
9. Subject–verb agreement: "Backups ... and allows you to access them again." — verb should match plural subject. (Should be "allow" not "allows".)
10. Pronoun agreement: "if the friend wants to frame it." — "the friend" is awkward/unclear, and "it" does not agree with plural "photos". (Use "a friend" or "your friend" and "them" instead of "it".)
11. Slight redundancy / style: "Backups will help protect the photos from any accidents or glitches and allows you to access them again." — repetition of "photos" and slightly clunky. (Consider tightening for clarity and concision.)

Those are the errors found in your paragraph.