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Turn that Camera Around: Women & the Perils of Selfie Culture
by Bree Rolfe

1 It might be hard to believe, but more people died in 2015 from selfies than from shark attacks, and while the number of deaths for both is relatively low, it’s shocking that such a ubiquitous practice can end in tragedy. This statistic, though a sad one, is ultimately true. In fact, from 2011 to 2017, 259 people died while attempting to take a selfie. People have perished in all manner of ways from being mauled by wild animals to falling off cliffs to countless traffic accidents. And while the negative effects of the selfie in these instances are obvious, is our cultural obsession with our own image hurting us in less obvious ways? Even if most selfies do not lead to deaths or freak accidents, they do have harmful psychological effects that can be especially destructive for women.

2 In a society that is constantly offering perfectly edited and filtered versions of ourselves, where authenticity is no longer expected or celebrated, it is easy to see why selfie culture is taking a collective toll on women’s self-esteem. According to clinical psychologist and author of Parenting a Teen Girl: A Crash Course on Conflict, Communication and Connection with Your Teenage Daughter, Lucie Hemmen, selfies and self-promotion can “damage our self-esteem” (Hemmen in Yadegaran). She goes on to explain that women “are often driven by insecurity to construct a desirable persona” and because of this, they are “vulnerable to the negative side of self-portraiture” (Hemmen). By constantly creating carefully stylized versions of themselves, women, especially teen women, can lose touch with their true identity and the ability to accept themselves and embrace their flaws. Thus, resulting in lower self-confidence when one’s actual self does not measure up to their online persona.

3 Even though selfies allow women to manipulate their public persona and meticulously curate their image, these edited versions do not actually make women feel any better about themselves. In fact, most women who regularly engage in posting and viewing selfies feel worse. A study done at York University found that “women who took and posted selfies to social media reported feeling more anxious, less confident, and less physically attractive afterwards” (Williams). Additionally, the ability to improve their looks wasn’t helpful and “harmful effects” were “found even when participants could retake and retouch their selfies” (Williams). Regardless of how good women make themselves look on social media, the constant photographing only further damages how women feel on the inside by creating a hyper focus on outward or superficial beauty. Ultimately, this focus will irrecoverably hurt a woman’s self-esteem and cause anxiety and even depression.

4 In more recent years, the selfie has been used as a tool for women’s empowerment and to raise awareness for social issues. On Instagram, there was a movement for “no makeup selfies” that raised money for breast cancer charities and a black and white “challenge accepted” campaign for women to lift each other up through positive affirmation. However, these campaigns are also problematic as they are sending women mixed messages and still focusing on a woman’s looks. For one, should not wearing make up and posting a photo a really be a “challenge” for women? Secondly, women praising one another’s artistic self-portraits is all well and good, but the focus is still on physical beauty and not accomplishments. This over-emphasis on appearance will ultimately cause women to have a distorted view of their value in society.

5 So, while most women aren’t trying to take pictures of themselves with wild bears or perilously teetering on the edge of mountains, they are still in danger of allowing a seemingly harmless activity to damage their sense of self. It might be time for women to simply turn the camera around and capture what the world has to offer beyond their own perfectly rendered reflections.

Answer 1

Claim: While selfies can sometimes be used for connection or awareness, overall they have a negative impact on individuals—especially women—because they create real physical dangers, erode self-esteem, and reinforce an unhealthy overemphasis on appearance.

The article Turn that Camera Around: Women & the Perils of Selfie Culture by Bree Rolfe opens with a startling fact that shows the extreme physical risks selfies can create: more people died in 2015 from selfies than from shark attacks, and from 2011 to 2017 a total of 259 people died while attempting to take a selfie. These deaths—ranging from falls and traffic accidents to animal attacks—demonstrate that the drive to capture an image of oneself can push people into dangerous, sometimes fatal behavior. Even if most selfies do not result in tragedy, this statistic makes clear that the practice carries concrete physical hazards when self-presentation becomes more important than safety.

Beyond the immediate dangers, Rolfe cites psychological research and expert opinion that link selfie culture to damage in self-image and mental health. Clinical psychologist Lucie Hemmen is quoted saying selfies and self-promotion can “damage our self-esteem,” that women are “often driven by insecurity to construct a desirable persona,” and therefore are “vulnerable to the negative side of self-portraiture.” Rolfe also summarizes a York University study finding that women who took and posted selfies reported feeling “more anxious, less confident, and less physically attractive afterwards.” Importantly, the study found these harmful effects even when participants could retake and retouch their photos. Together, these points show that the ability to curate and edit one’s image does not relieve insecurity; instead, repeated focus on outward appearance increases anxiety and lowers self-worth.

Some defenders point to selfie-driven movements—such as no-makeup selfies that raised money for breast cancer charities or the black-and-white “challenge accepted” campaign—as evidence that selfies can empower women. Rolfe acknowledges these gestures but argues they are problematic: they send mixed messages and still center value on looks rather than accomplishments. Asking women to treat not wearing makeup as a “challenge” implicitly accepts that appearance should be a central concern. Thus, even well-intentioned uses of selfies risk reinforcing the same harmful priorities that undermine confidence.

In sum, the article presents both grim physical outcomes and robust psychological evidence that selfie culture does more harm than good for many people, particularly women. Rather than letting our identity and worth be measured by carefully edited reflections, Rolfe urges women to “turn the camera around” and engage with the world outside their own image. For individuals and society to foster healthier self-esteem and safer behavior, we should heed that call and reduce the centrality of selfies in how we define ourselves.