Question

The key concept of this paragraph is deforestation by humans. The author develops the key concept by first using a fact in the first sentence to hook the reader. Next, the author gives examples of what and why people do deforestation. The paragraph also mentions wild fires can cause deforestation, but states that it is a natural cause and is more common for humans to do deforestation more. Finally, the authors states that forests are too important for people, animals, and the environment, so it should be stopped.

proofread this and keep my wording and pls list the stuff

Answer 1

Proofread paragraph (kept your wording as close as possible):

The key concept of this paragraph is deforestation by humans. The author develops the key concept by first using a fact in the first sentence to hook the reader. Next, the author gives examples of what people do and why they cause deforestation. The paragraph also mentions wildfires can cause deforestation, but states that this is a natural cause and that human-caused deforestation is more common. Finally, the author states that forests are too important for people, animals, and the environment, so it should be stopped.

List of the stuff in the paragraph:
- Key concept: deforestation by humans
- Hook: a fact in the first sentence
- Examples: what people do and why they cause deforestation
- Natural cause mentioned: wildfires (but noted as less common)
- Comparison: human-caused deforestation is more common than natural causes
- Conclusion/call to action: forests are important for people, animals, and the environment, so deforestation should be stopped