Question

Read the sentence.

She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool, brisk swim.

Which is the best revision of this sentence?
She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.
She met her friends at the hotel’s bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they could head over to the swimming pool for a cool, brisk swim.
For a cool, brisk, refreshing swim at the hotel’s pool, she met her friends in the hotel’s lobby on the bottom floor.
The sentence is correct as written.

Answer 1

She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.

This revision removes the awkward appositive ("the bottom floor") and tightens redundant phrasing while keeping the meaning.