Question

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My boss asked me to get feedback from an expert on our proposed project schedule.

The file is attached.



Sam

Answer 1

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Completed example
Subject: Request for expert review — proposed project schedule (attached)

Hi Dr. Patel,

My manager asked me to get an expert review of the attached proposed project schedule for the Northwind Platform Upgrade. Could you please review it and share any comments on schedule feasibility, critical path, key risks, and any assumptions that look optimistic or missing?

If possible, we would appreciate your feedback by Friday, Jan 29. If that timeline doesn’t work, please let me know a date that does. I’m also happy to set up a 30-minute call to walk through the schedule if you prefer — I’m available Monday and Wednesday afternoons.

Thank you very much for your time and expertise.

Best regards,
Sam
Project Coordinator, Operations
[email protected] | [phone]

Fill-in-the-blanks template
Subject: Request for expert review — proposed project schedule (attached)

Hi [Recipient Name],

My manager, [Manager Name], asked me to get an expert review of the attached proposed project schedule for [Project Name]. Could you please review the attached file ([Attachment File Name]) and share your thoughts on:

- Overall feasibility of the timeline
- The critical path and any tasks that may be underestimated
- Key risks or missing dependencies
- Resource assumptions and duration estimates

Would you be able to provide feedback by [Requested Date]? If that’s not possible, please let me know a convenient deadline. If you prefer to discuss this by phone or video, I can make time for a 30-minute call — I’m available [2–3 time options].

Thank you for your help.

Best regards,
Sam [Last Name]
[Title]
[Company]
[Phone]
[Email]

If you tell me the recipient, project name, file name and deadline, I can fill the template in for you.