Question

I think that we should use animals but I think first we need to find a way to cure the diseases they have. Because, that is a major reason that people have to kill animals even sometimes dogs and cats because of rabies or worst like the two dIseases they said in the story or (THE HARMS AND BENEFITS OF ANIMALS) the texts states," Animals can spread diseases(e.g,, zoontic infections sch as rabies and salmonella) that is why i think we should use but help animals more. And, we need animals for protein and they can help loneilness by 36% like my mom had a migraine and are dog Joey stayed by her side that is why I think we need to use animals more..



5. Which revision best corrects grammar, capitalization, and formal tone? Original: the texts states, " Animals can spread diseases(e.g,, zoontic infections sch as rabies and salmonella) that is why i think we should use but help animals more."

A.
Text say animals spread diseas so we help them.


B.
The text states animals spread disease so we should stop.


C.
The text states, "Animals can spread diseases (e.g., zoonotic infections such as rabies and salmonella); therefore, we should continue using animals while improving prevention."


D.
The text state: animals spread disease.


E.
Animals spread rabies and salmonella so they are bad.

Answer 1

C

Reason: It corrects capitalization and punctuation, fixes spelling ("zoonotic"), and uses a clear, formal structure that preserves the original meaning (use animals while improving disease prevention).