Question

You are revising a narrative paragraph about a fox named Farah.

Edit the sentences so the paragraph has a relaxed tone.

Farah
was
a
curious
fox
who
lived
in
a

crowded
underground
den.
One
morning,
Farah
went
off
to
explore
the
forest.
She
came
across
a
trickling
stream
that
curved
through
the
forest.
Farah
walked
next
to
the
stream
and

squirmed with delight
,
imagining
how
she
might
spend
the
rest
of
her
day.

Answer 1

Farah was a curious fox who lived in a crowded underground den. One morning she wandered into the forest to explore. She came across a small, trickling stream that curved lazily through the trees. Farah padded along its bank, let out a contented sigh, and pictured the easy ways she might spend the rest of her day.