Asked by Cheesecake

Which graduation announcement is more formal?
Choose one
1. We are proud to announce the graduation of Cameron Goodman.

2. Cameron Goodman is graduating, and we couldn't be more proud!

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
Option 1 is more formal.

Reason: it uses neutral, impersonal phrasing ("We are proud to announce the graduation of...") and no contractions or exclamation points. Option 2 is conversational and celebratory (contraction and exclamation), which reads less formal.