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There was a stockyard. Jurgis worked there. His coworkers told stories. They described horrific working conditions.

Which revision most effectively combines the sentences?


At a stockyard, Jurgis worked and his coworkers told stories about horrific
working conditions.


Jurgis worked at a stockyard, and his coworkers told stories describing the horrific working
conditions there.


Jurgis, working at a stockyard, heard stories about horrific working conditions from
his coworkers.


There was a stockyard Jurgis worked at, and horrific working conditions were described
by his coworkers.

All Answers 1

Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
"Jurgis, working at a stockyard, heard stories about horrific working conditions from his coworkers."

This revision is the most effective: it combines the ideas smoothly, uses active voice, and is clear and concise.