Question

fix this sentence
I have fun like a child in the street when the day comes when I'm not enjoying it I will leave football.

Answer 1

Here are a few corrected versions you can choose from, depending on the tone you want:

- Casual: "I have fun like a child in the street. When the day comes that I'm not enjoying it anymore, I'll quit football."
- Neutral: "I enjoy myself like a child in the street. If the day comes when I'm no longer enjoying it, I will leave football."
- Formal: "I take pleasure in it as a child would in the street; if a day comes when I no longer enjoy it, I will give up football."

Changes made: added punctuation, clarified timing with "when the day comes" → "if/when the day comes that..." and smoothed phrasing ("not enjoying it anymore," "quit/give up/leave football").