Asked by bill

Which sentences are appropriate to include in a personal statement? Check all that apply.

I think that science is the most interesting subject; it’s way better than history or English.
In terms of a career, my schooling hasn’t really contributed to helping me find out what I want to do with my future.
My interests are pretty varied, and I could be happy doing just about anything in the future.
Journalism has been a strong interest of mine and is an area I would like to learn more about in the future.
Biology and the study of nature have always intrigued me, and I would enjoy a career that allows me to work outdoors with plants and animals.
My experience in theater has created a lifelong dream of performing on Broadway and eventually teaching other aspiring performers.

All Answers 1

Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
Appropriate: sentences 4, 5, and 6.

- 4: "Journalism has been a strong interest of mine and is an area I would like to learn more about in the future." — specific, positive, shows clear interest and intent to develop it.
- 5: "Biology and the study of nature have always intrigued me, and I would enjoy a career that allows me to work outdoors with plants and animals." — specific, shows sustained interest and a realistic career goal.
- 6: "My experience in theater has created a lifelong dream of performing on Broadway and eventually teaching other aspiring performers." — shows experience, ambition, and a future plan (passion + teaching).

Not appropriate: sentences 1–3.

- 1 is dismissive/comparative and comes across as unprofessional.
- 2 is negative and suggests passivity rather than initiative.
- 3 is vague and noncommittal, which doesn’t strengthen a personal statement.