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Sinking and Swaddled
by Beth Gilstrap

She swore she felt the earth drop—like a hitch in an elevator—several miles from her mother’s house. She thought of all those bedlinens agitated, curled, heaped on top of her mother, sunk along with everything else, beams, roof tiles, the acrylic nails her mom wore, the senselessness of waste. Her father had sunk, too. Years ago, in a prefab home out on the lake. One day the lake rose a mite and the ground dove a mite and from what her mother said, her father was better off down there, probably still passed out on his leather couch. Ona had been swaddled and maneuvered into the bow of a rowboat and, as legend tells, slept through the whole affair. Perhaps it was this swaddling she longed for more than anything with all this terrible sinking going on.

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- Summary: A woman feels a deep, recurring sensation of the world dropping and links it to memories of her father sinking into a lake and of being swaddled as an infant, suggesting a longing for safety amid steady losses.
- Notes: The piece uses sinking as both literal and metaphorical motif (earth, bedlinens, family), contrasting domestic details (acrylic nails, leather couch) with mythic/swaddled imagery; tone is elegiac and slightly surreal, with an undercurrent of resignation.

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