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Which item effectively and correctly revises sentence 14?
A. After several trials she finally produced a batch she was happy with, she even said that she would serve the results at her own table.
B. After several trials she finally produced a batch she was happy with and she even said that: she would serve the results at her own table.
C. After several trials she finally produced a batch she was happy with; she even said that she would serve the results at her own table.
D. No change is needed.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
C. The original has a comma splice; a semicolon correctly joins the two independent clauses without creating a run-on.