I did a few ads on clothing. Here are some more I've come up with. Yet, I still don't find them to be so sophisticated and cool. Could I please seek some assistance?

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You could get "them."

Thx.

I read somewhere that people are more likely to buy if they feel like they will be missing out if they don't- a "don't miss this great one time sale!" might help