Question

Which two responses about the text demonstrate good sentence variety?
The eclipse begins. The world begins to change. Its appearance alters. It looks like a scene from another time.
The world begins to change. The moon eclipses the sun. Lighting is strange. Everything looks different.
As the eclipse begins, the world begins to change. Its appearance alters. It looks like a scene from another time.
As the eclipse begins, everything begins to change. As the sun is covered, odd lighting makes the world look different.
The world begins to change as the moon eclipses the sun. Lighting is strange. Everything looks different.

Answer 1

Responses 3 and 5.

Both mix sentence structures (complex + simple) and vary length, avoiding the repetitive, choppy short sentences or repeated openings found in the others.