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At OBK, we specialize in providing top-notch bookkeeping and tax services to help you focus on what matters most – growing your business. We understand that managing finances can be overwhelming, so we're here to make it easier for you.
Here's what we offer:
Bookkeeping: Only $99 per month per account.
Payroll Services: Just $10 per payroll per employee.
Personal Tax Returns: $199.
Business Tax Returns: $399.
Special Offer: Your First Month Free!
As a special promotion, we're offering your first month of bookkeeping service absolutely free. Experience our professional and reliable service without any risk or commitment. After the first month, our bookkeeping service is as low as $99 per month.
Take advantage of this limited-time offer and let us handle your financial needs with expertise and precision.
Contact us today to get started!
Best regards,
John M.
[email protected]
877-670-3589

Answer 1

Thanks — I can help polish and repurpose this into marketing-ready copy. Before I finalize anything, quick questions:
- Do you want a formal or friendly tone?
- Any restrictions or required legal text (e.g., “prices subject to change”, end date for the promo, or “additional fees may apply”)?
- Is “per account” and “per payroll per employee” clear to your audience, or should I reword (for example “per bookkeeping account” and “per employee per payroll run”)?

Below are ready-to-use options you can copy/paste: an email, short social post, SMS, and a Google ad example, plus a few subject lines and suggested legal/clarity statements.

1) Polished email (full)
Subject line options:
- First month free — bookkeeping $99/month
- Simplify your books: First month free at OBK
- Bookkeeping + payroll + taxes — starting at $99/month

Email body:
Hello,

At OBK we specialize in reliable bookkeeping and tax services so you can focus on growing your business. Let us handle the numbers — accurate, timely, and affordable.

Services & Pricing
- Bookkeeping: $99 per month per account
- Payroll: $10 per payroll run per employee
- Personal tax returns: $199
- Business tax returns: $399

Special offer — First month free
Try our bookkeeping service risk-free — your first month is on us. No commitment required. After your free month, bookkeeping continues at $99/month per account.

Ready to get started? Reply to this email or contact John M. at [email protected] or 877-670-3589 and we’ll set you up.

Best regards,
John M.
OBK — Outsource Bookkeeper
[email protected] | 877-670-3589

2) Short social post (Facebook/LinkedIn)
Bookkeeping made simple. First month free! Get professional bookkeeping for just $99/month per account. Payroll only $10 per payroll per employee. Personal returns $199 — business returns $399. Contact John at [email protected] or 877-670-3589 to get started.

3) SMS (160-char friendly)
Try OBK bookkeeping free for 1 month. Then $99/mo per account. Payroll $10/employee per run. Tax returns: personal $199, business $399. Reply or call 877-670-3589.

4) Google ad example
Headline: First Month Free Bookkeeping
Description: Bookkeeping just $99/mo per account. Payroll $10/employee. Personal taxes $199. Business taxes $399. Contact OBK today.

5) Suggested legal/clarity text to add (short)
- “Limited-time offer. First month free for new customers only. Additional fees may apply. Offer subject to change.”
- Clarify billing: “$99/month per bookkeeping account. Payroll fee is per employee, per payroll run.”
- Clarify tax filing: “Prices for tax returns cover standard federal and state e-filing; complex returns may incur additional fees.”

If you want, I can:
- Produce an HTML email template with CTA button
- Create variations for different audiences (freelancers, small businesses, contractors)
- Add a short FAQ or objections-handling section

Which option would you like me to finalize next?