Asked by justin

Read the sentence.

Drying its wings by the pool, Sarah saw a wet bee.

What is the best way to revise this sentence?
Sarah saw a wet bee drying its wings by the pool.
Sarah saw a wet bee, by the pool, trying to dry its wet wings.
A bee by the pool was seen by Sarah drying its wings.
The sentence is correct as written.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
"Sarah saw a wet bee drying its wings by the pool."

Explanation: The original has a dangling participle ("Drying its wings...") that incorrectly modifies Sarah. Placing the participial phrase after "bee" makes the modifier attach to the correct noun.