Question

Hey, Mrs.Fitz Im asking if I could use one of ur camera for the game tmr but im not going to be here for the rest of the week besides tdy
make it sound more polite

Answer 1

Here are three polite options you can use — pick the tone that fits you best:

1) Short & polite
Hi Mrs. Fitz — could I please borrow one of your cameras for the game tomorrow? I won’t be at school the rest of the week besides today, so I can pick it up this afternoon if that works. Thank you!

2) Slightly more formal
Dear Mrs. Fitz, I hope you’re well. May I please borrow one of your cameras for tomorrow’s game? I won’t be at school for the remainder of the week except today, so I can come by to collect it this afternoon if convenient. Thank you for your consideration.

3) Casual/text version
Hi Mrs. Fitz — can I borrow a camera for tomorrow’s game? I’m only here today this week, so I can grab it now if that’s okay. Thanks!