Question

Making tree bark rubbings is a great way to identify a tree without harming it. Find some wax crayons to create the rubbing. You can use leftover pieces of broken crayons, which helps reuse, reduce, and recycle household objects. Use medium-weight plain white paper so you can see the most details in the finished rubbing.

Which revision best makes the instructions more concise?

Making rubbings of tree bark can be a lot of fun.
Find crayons to create the rubbing.
You can use leftover pieces of broken crayons.
Use medium-weight plain white paper.

Answer 1

Make tree-bark rubbings with wax crayons (broken pieces OK) on medium-weight white paper.

This condenses the four sentences into one clear instruction.