Asked by caleb
Read or review the script Mona used for her oral report about the solar system.
Mars is one of the planets in the solar system. It is near Earth, and there are some robotic machines exploring Mars. There might be life on the Red Planet.
Other planets include Mercury, Jupiter, Saturn, Venus, Uranus, and Neptune. Earth is a planet too, and it is the third planet from the Sun.
The sun is in the middle of the solar system which is part of the Milky Way which is a galaxy in the universe.Planets go orbiting around the sun in circles, and orbit means go around.Is there life on other planets? We don’t know, but there probably is.
Which of the following is an appropriate criticism of Mona’s report on the solar system?
It is incorrect.
It should include information about stars.
It is poorly organized.
It should be presented on paper.
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It is poorly organized.
The report jumps between topics (starts on Mars, then lists other planets, then Earth, then the Sun, then a question about life) with few transitions. Rearranging into a clear structure (intro, order of planets, key facts about a few planets, the Sun, conclusion) and adding connecting sentences would improve it.
The report jumps between topics (starts on Mars, then lists other planets, then Earth, then the Sun, then a question about life) with few transitions. Rearranging into a clear structure (intro, order of planets, key facts about a few planets, the Sun, conclusion) and adding connecting sentences would improve it.
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