Asked by Quandra

Read the excerpt from "Surrendering” by Ocean Vuong.

After a few days, the poem appeared as gray graphite words. The paper a white flag. I had surrendered, had written.

How does the author’s use of short sentences affect the tone of the excerpt?

It contributes to a regretful tone.
It contributes to a sentimental tone.
It contributes to a relieved tone.
It contributes to a sarcastic tone.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
It contributes to a relieved tone.

The short, clipped sentences create pauses and emphasis—especially with the white flag image—making the act of surrender feel resolved and released rather than wistful or bitter.