Question

(21) The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and Jessie managed to capture some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion was sitting high up on a rock ledge.

What is the BEST revision to make in sentence 21?
A
The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion sitting high up on a rock ledge—Jessie managed to capture.
B
The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and Jessie managed to capture some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion sitting high up on a rock ledge.
C
The air was cool, and the views were phenomenal—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion was sitting high up on a rock ledge—as some amazing wildlife pictures that Jessie managed to capture.
D
The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and what Jessie managed to capture were some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion that was sitting high up on a rock ledge.

Answer 1

B

Explanation: Option B maintains parallel structure in the parenthetical list ("a black bear ambling..." and "a mountain lion sitting...") and is the clearest, most concise revision.