Question

What is the BEST revision to make in sentence 21?
A
The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion sitting high up on a rock ledge—Jessie managed to capture.
B
The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and Jessie managed to capture some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion sitting high up on a rock ledge.
C
The air was cool, and the views were phenomenal—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion was sitting high up on a rock ledge—as some amazing wildlife pictures that Jessie managed to capture.
D
The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and what Jessie managed to capture were some amazing wildlife pictures—a black bear ambling across a beach along the Rio Grande and a mountain lion that was sitting high up on a rock ledge.

Answer 1

B

This version is clear and parallel: the three coordinate elements ("The air was cool, the views were phenomenal, and Jessie managed to capture some amazing wildlife pictures") read smoothly and the parenthetical examples follow the noun they modify.