Question

(18) With two family members already in college, my mother, who is a single head of household, will be financially burdened to afford me the opportunity to attend without financial aid. (19) I am hoping that a scholarship to Lewis College can help me achieve my academic goals.

(20) Sincerely,
Dee Dee Maple




Sentence 18 needs to be revised. In the space or box provided, rewrite sentence 18 in a clear and effective way.

Answer 1

Because two other family members are already in college, my mother, as a single head of household, could not afford to send me to college without financial aid.