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(12) Inventing the waxed paper bag, Mrs. Scudder each night had women take home sheets of waxed paper. (13) They folded the waxed paper and ironed three sides to make a small bag. (14) The next day, factory workers hand packed them with chips and ironed the fourth side shut. (15) The airtight bag kept the chips fresh, grocers could then market the product as a self-serve item.
(16) If it wasn’t for the unplanned discovery of George Crum and the entrepreneurial spirit of Laura Scudder, we wouldn’t have the potato chips we enjoy today. (17) The invention and popularity of potato chips in the beginning of the 20th century, helped pave the road to the variety and obsessions we have with them today.
The following question is focused on revisions that need to be made to Gail’s paper. Answer accordingly.
Sentence 12 needs to be revised. In the space or box provided, rewrite sentence 12 in a clear and effective way.
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Mrs. Scudder, who invented the waxed-paper bag, had women take home sheets of waxed paper each night.
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