Question

is this polite?

Hello Mrs. H,

I hope you're doing well. Is it possible if I could do test corrections for science Unit 3, Lesson 14, "Matter Interactions Unit Test"? If not, I understand.

Thank you,
name removed due to privacy reasons

Answer 1

Yes — it's polite. It’s clear and respectful. I’d only tweak the wording to make it slightly more natural and a bit more formal. Two short options:

More natural/formal:
Hello Mrs. H,
I hope you’re doing well. Would it be possible for me to complete test corrections for the Unit 3, Lesson 14 “Matter Interactions” unit test? If not, I understand.
Thank you,
[Your name]

Polite + offers availability:
Hello Mrs. H,
I hope you’re doing well. May I please complete test corrections for the Unit 3, Lesson 14 “Matter Interactions” unit test? I’m available after school or during lunch, if that helps. If not, I understand.
Thank you,
[Your name]

Explanation: “Would it be possible” or “May I” sounds less awkward than “Is it possible if I could.” Also consider using the teacher’s preferred title or last name if you know it.