Question

Review paragraph 4.

Cher Ami's Message

Pigeons were ideally suited for wartime work. They were easy to carry and feed during troop movements. In addition, the birds were fast and reliable, reaching speeds of up to 60 mph. Many wartime homing pigeons sustained injuries during fights. However, these wounded birds still continued their missions. Cher Ami, whose name means dear friend in French, was one of those heroic birds

Answer 1

Thanks — here’s a brief review and a tightened rewrite.

Issues found
- "the birds" is vague; specify "homing pigeons."
- "fights" is informal — use "combat" or "battles."
- "still continued" is redundant; use "continued" or "still carried out."
- Missing period at the end of the paragraph.
- Minor style: combine short sentences for smoother flow.

Suggested revision
Cher Ami's Message

Homing pigeons were ideally suited for wartime work: they were easy to carry and feed during troop movements and could reach speeds of up to 60 mph. Many were wounded in combat, yet often completed their missions despite their injuries. Cher Ami — whose name means "dear friend" in French — was one of those heroic birds.

If you want a more formal tone or a longer version that adds historical detail about Cher Ami, I can expand it.